"I've crossed bridges in life
that threatened to fall" i love those lines, because they are so true. about taking chances in life and just hope that it works out for the best! you have a lot of great lines through out the poem. keep up the good work!
We do have to cross those bridges and climb those mountains and we can't always stay at the top...there will be times we fall. But it only makes us stronger and we learn to survive. Beautiful poem and so true.
That gave me a knot in my throat! That gave me tears in my eyes. But it did put a smile on my face because when I read it, more then anything the message I got was you've learned from your mistakes! This was a gorgeous poem JJ and the next time you fall get right back up because you'll still be shining like you are now! Much love to you!
I loves this poem as it is so true to all our lives. as we go through life we have to make desions and well they dont always seem to eb the right ones and this tells us of this keep writing i loved it
loves emmie xxxxxx