Response to "How Much I Miss You"

by dandy   Aug 31, 2005


Sitting here alone in this room;
Sadness enclosing like a tomb.

Longing for your arms to surround;
Missing what we have, a love so profound.

I miss your voice,
your butterfly kisses,
your smell, eyes and smile;
For these, my heart wishes.

Can't stop thoughts of you
from entering my head.
Dreaming of you every night,
and the holidays ahead.

Continuing on because I'm required,
putting on a good face
to hide my desire.....you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Sadness enclosing like a tomb
    that's neat and it's very descriptive, nice!
    to hide my desire.....you.
    might wanna change that to
    to hide my desire.....
    you.
    I think it would improve it to put you on the next line, very captivating, 4/5 the structure and flow needs work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Scaito

    Very good, I like it quite a bit, how i long for the holidays as well

    Love You

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nice poem. I really enjoyed it. It flowed nicely and it gave me a sense of romance and longing. Great job:)

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