The Subconcious

by Julia   Sep 4, 2005


I walked down the road,
Where the leaves never fall,
Where the crow never screeches,
Where the child never calls.

Why might you ask,
Had the knife been so blind,
Had the truth felt like treason,
And the earth so unkind.

They root from the earth,
And they grow so surreal,
A twisted incision,
In a calm pointless field.

Dreams bloomed like sparks,
From this unwanted mind,
Leaving all thought, all reason,
In a locket left behind.

Then the earth screamed,
Like a disfigured beast,
Calling me back,
To a silence left unbreached.

Yet I tore from the ground,
I flew twirling out,
Silent, confused,
At what "it" was about.

As Icarus's child,
I fell whirling down,
The sun has burned my wings,
The sea left not a sound.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Maelle

    Wow thats amazing... you write beautifully... keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    ...Truly speechless... I hardly realized it was a poem... It came to me as a dream. You portrayed this so well, fantastic. You are an unbelieveable poet with almost too much talent... go write a book and get it published... I'm serious, you're amazing.
    Full points, and you're joining my favorites.
    Wow.

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  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Thanks for the comment on my poem the green eyed monster. this poem is v. good and im gona add u 2 my faves aswell! keep it up! jess