When?

by tiffany   Sep 4, 2005


When will i find that person
the person that I'm supposed
to be with?
when will i find that person
that will be there when
I'm down?
when will i find that person
that will hold me in there
arms?
when will i find that person
that will laugh with me?
when will i find that person
that will cry with me?
when will i find that person
that knows what I'm about
to say?
when will i fond that person
i pray for everyday?
when will i find that person
that makes me happy?
when will i find that person
i cant live without?
when will i find that person
that cant live without me?
when will i find that person
that i love?
when will i find that person
that loves me?

this poem is for my friend. keep lookin hes out there!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow, that what im saying to myself, im gettin older, when that person will love me when i am happy.. i loved it.. gurl, u have a good thoughts. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CareBear

    Lookz Lyk you have a lot of comments already. And my opinion will be the same. Itz beautiful. Amazing! Well Written. Thanx for you comment! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I like this poem very much. what really appeals to me is the reoccuring line 'When will i find that person'. this poem is very passionate, emotional, creative, intelligent and heartfelt. keep writing, i look forward to reading more of your works

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for commenting on various poem of mine. your's, along with other people's comments help me to write better (i hope) lol. so thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hey Tiffany! Nice job! Really enjoyed this one! Keep it up! Have u checked my new poems?

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Love it. =)

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