Suicide Unnoticed

by Jamie   Sep 5, 2005


*just sad I guess, and the first letter of every line going down spells something so that was fun lol*

Sometimes I can't think
Until the blood drains down the sink
Intentionally ruining my skin
Crying as the blade slips in
I sometimes bleed until I fall
Dying as I seem so small
Every time you take it all

Underneath the layer of dirt
Nothing is there but all the hurt
Nobody listens to these cries
Only blood, blades, and vicious lies
Time and time again I bleed
I think this time I'll die indeed
Calling out to get no reply
Emptiness inside I can't deny
Darkness swallows every cry

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by xThexForgotten1x

    Yea that poem was soo cool how you spelled suicide unnoticed was amazing cuz it just blended in with the poem lol your so geat at this... and question..?? I read some of your other poems and I was wondering how do you write such good stuff! it is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    5/5 THIS I FEEL SO FAR OF WHAT I'VE READ....Is one of your best...Very very good. It's like the words Suicide Unnoticed just fit the rest of the poem perfect...Some people when They try to do that, it's very easy to spot out what they're trying to do. In all honesty, If you wouldn't have told me the words it spelt out I probably wouldnt have noticed you did it, Yet Got the same thought in my head. The whole poem flowed EXTREMELY WELL. Awesome Job.
    _Ash_

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Oh wow...its so sad. i love you lol. aww it makes me wanna cry..tear. you an amazing writer

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Jamie