You give you give, Give me your life!

by Anonymous   Sep 6, 2005


What's so good about our lives,
We live and sin and then we die,
Between events we laugh and cry,
After we're done, we sleep and sigh,

Would it be so bad if I'm your guy,
It's no big deal, it's just one life,
Again again, will you be mine,
Again again, you will deny,

I ask myself to say goodbye,
I tell myself, myself to lie,
Forget forget, You cannot buy,
Forget forget, she's not your type,

And yet and yet, I cannot like,
Another girl, not worth a dime,
But you but you, You're worth ten times,
What they what they, could hope to provide

Girl of worth, you're in my mind,
I dream I dream, of just one time,
I ask I ask, will you be mine,
Please Oh Please, will you decide,

And then and then, We'll be just fine,
Because you know, they're just our lives,
You give you give, Give me your life,
I give I give, Give you my life,
Besides,

What's so good about our lives,
We live and sin and then we die,
Between events we laugh and cry,
After we're done, we sleep and sigh,

Now we can and stand beside,
Our other hand, beneficial vibe,
Our thoughts and feelings, may now reside,
Between us between us, minus time.

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    by dora

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    by Jaime

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