My destiny

by crystal   Sep 6, 2005


Every night i lay in bed
thinking of my day
and i think about tomorrow
will it be the same way?

will something better happen?
or will it all just be the same?
if i go on living
will i still have to play this game?

i don't know what it is
but somethings keeping me here
there has to be some reason
I'm hiding all my fear

as i lay here i wonder
why i can't let it out?
why is everything screwed up?
what is it all about?

i don't know where I'm going
but when i get there i will
I'll go on living my life
my destiny to fulfill

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I liked it, well done indeed. You've solidified your rhyme, and it shows.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    It was pretty good , and has a good flow to it . =) keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Simply "My Destiny"! excellent poem and i enjoyed read it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Ok first off..good poem. it flowed well. for a title...ehh i really dont know. if your in a club type thing post a suggestion...thats what i do. or come up with something that sums up the whole poem like the last few lines. that helps me! anyways sry if im not much help. im not good at titles...4/5

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