The Proposal

by aaron c s   Sep 7, 2005


I'm getting down on my knee
Offering all of me
Showing you the ring
Finally living my dream

My heart is beating
Can I be dreaming
Is it time
Will she be mine

I've been alone all these years
Having so many fears
And crying so many tears
But can this all be real

This is forever
Always together
This can't be a mistake
Do I still have time to escape

You take my hand in yours
And my heart soars
Will I no longer be alone
Does my heart never have to roam

you get down and look into my eyes
With one last kiss
This is it
You say goodbye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwww, Aaron... That is such a sad, sad poem... I like how you put a twist in the end... Throughout the poem you make it seem like the girl will say yes, but in the end she says goodbye... WOW... I wish I was as good of a poet as you... and any girl would be stupid to say goodbye to you... I love you lots, my bestestest friend in the whole wide world!
    Love always,
    BJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    O M F G
    u mind is weird and demented and i luv how u think babe so who was that 4? says nosy** umm email me babe
    luv ya lots
    tess

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Hey aaron,
    Its me KALA!!!!!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN BOY!!!!!!!!! Thanks for calling me for the past month or two -says it starcasticly- Honestly I swear you need to call me sometime!!!!!!!!!!! Well I loved this poem but the ending was sad! I hope that doesn't happen to you.

    Call me sometime time Love ya
    Kala

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Omg! im soo sorry if this is true...i just got engaged with my boyfriend myself. i really hope everthing works out for you!!! im sooo sorry! i have no idea what u must be feeling but i hope u never feel it again. the poem was excellent, alot of feeling! smile, it'll get better! 5/5

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