Really good poem....i love it im sorry you had to deal with that 5/5

I really think you did a great job on your poem! Sorry to hear about your loss... Keep writing, it helps.

Omg tear...literally (actually mor elike tears).
wow thats so sad..i'm so sorry
great poem you are so talented!!
take care x x x

Ahh thtis is sasd, true, painful, emotion, very good, very good job indeed

I am so glad you share your amazing talent on this site. Thankyou

That is so sad, but its not melodramatic, and thats what makes it harder to read. its kind of like a sick feeling in ur heart, its amazing, u write very well. xx