The Gift

by Italian Stallion   Sep 10, 2005


No time to think
it's about to sink
no time to dream
it's at the seam
no time to play
it's just that time of day
but take the time to love
it's the greatest gift from above

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    But take the time to love
    it's the greatest gift from above

    this line is so true^^ again short but gets the message across.. loved it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    Short and sweet! But on a serious note, once again i like the message- i often feel like there isn't enough hours in the day to get everything done but i always make time for the ones i love- they keep me sane! I like how you structured it as well- i was not expecting the poem toe nd like that. Take care. XxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOW! VERY GOOD! I'm putting you on my favorite's list. I think I might want to borrow this poem sometime. If that's alright with you? :o)

    Thanks again! 5/5!

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Ashley

    Aww Joe,
    I loved it , keep it up hun,
    -Love Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    This poem was charming!
    I really liked it.

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