Urgency of Elements

by LadyPearl   Sep 10, 2005


Fall of night's hideous minds
in which all elements start to combine
water drowns millions of lives
air reflecting thousands of bloody knives

Fire burns the flesh from deep within
Burning like the unforgiving sins
ice freezing blood around
so silent and mysterious, without a sound

Earth it's revenge in whips of green
dark of night, cannot be seen
Hands of the battle, proceed shall the light
going, and going till it wins the fight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow.
    you've definately improvd but im still enjoying your older pieces.

    5/5
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    Lol good job! you always write really great poems noni! keep up the good work! :0)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I love the style and idea of it, but it could use a little work, nothing big, just a quick re-read through and tighten up a few things. No worries though, you've got it.