6 feet under, with no one there

by Broken Hearted Soul   Sep 11, 2005


I fell as if I'm buried 6 feet under the ground.

No one knows I'm there, they dont even seem to care.

I yell and scream cant anyone hear?

I cry and cry but no one knows I'm there

Cant you see the tear's I cry?

I just wish you all would die and know I'm not the one to cry

Ill act like your not there I'll even walk past your grave and not care

this is what you did to me and now it is you who well see

what its like to be like me!

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this one is sad & i really know how it feels, my first posted poem was abt it, how it feels to be me..lol

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I can hear your screams
    I can see your tears
    I can feel your beat
    But i can't make you happy

    It's nice and well done.
    You are great, hope to see more from you, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Morbid_reflection

    I loved this poem, it was really good. keep it up, have a lil bit more confidence bout your writing though. Amie

  • 18 years ago

    by David Beckham

    I liked it

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