A feeling

by Andrea broken tears   Sep 11, 2005


Millions of stars
not a cloud in the sky
rain turns to sun on this day
I'm not turning back
in to deep
I'm to tired to sleep
the day turned to night
can't win this fight
cut my wrists to watch it bleed
the blade fulfills my every need
feel no pain
I go insane
close the door
I fall to the floor
In a pool of red
now I'm dead
Millions of stars go away
theres clouds in the sky
sun turns to rain on this day.

**this poem sucks**

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Who says it's suck. Nice usage of word and it makes my heart melt.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Nice poem 5/5 great begining and end

  • 18 years ago

    by Joey P

    I dont think this poem sucks, i just u had alot of emotion and got them mix up. I enjoyed this one anyway.

    God Bless

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