Can u see

by anna   Sep 11, 2005


Can u see the way i feel
can u see the pain inside
I'm dieing in here fast
cut every day just to last

wish u come hold me tight
one cut to be over u two cut
to make it throw the night
now can u see the pain inside of me

the last cut is done now lie me down six feet in a hole I'm done

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  • 18 years ago

    by shadows cloud my ability to love save me

    Great poem srtong and sad , keep up the good work hun u gotta a 5/5 from me

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Aww thts sad, very good hun!
    keep it up!
    becca x

  • 18 years ago

    by Heart Broken Angel

    Wow its .. very good ..I can feel it . its touching. .. keep it up hun !

    Crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Very Good. I know what you are feeling..and it sux. Keep up the work and write, i would like to see more of ur stuff! Anyway talk to me whenever!

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Very good. That is happening around everywhere you go. People not paying attention to others. Then the cut themself for attention. Very sad. Good poem though.

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