Babydoll

by ~~Fire Angel~~   Sep 12, 2005


Blurred Daylight, Darkened Bed.
Hazardous Voice, Sticky Thick Air.
Damnable smell of sweat and TEARS.
I look around to see a pale red.
Delightful window closed but bare,
Outside was nothing to fear.

Raspy moans, smell thick leather,
Short LOUD breaths... please hold it together!
"Please get away! Leave me alone!"
"You know better than to use that tone!!"

Comforting moon what a beautiful face!
I scream and tremble as he picks up the pace...
It'll be over soon, i don't want it to end...
He'll just do it over again!!!

At least It'll give me time to mend.
"Baby doll, I've ruined you for other men"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow stuning and powerfull ... 5 for you hate to think something like that is real the pain the anger so well done

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Kymber*

    Omg , i love it - so beautifully wrong

  • 18 years ago

    by void.

    Excellent imagery. Sets the dreariness of the tone very well. Great syntax. Powerful subject. Bravo.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    That was a great poem i loved it. thanks for commenting mine also. you are a great writer. im gonna try to read all your poems right now. im sure there just as great as this on.keep up the work......luv and huggs...missy

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Weird poem. But it was good.
    Keep it up :)

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