Fire Queen

by ~~Fire Angel~~   Sep 14, 2005


No other man will have that voice,
That stole away my spirits choice.
No other man will bear his hands,
That could silence me with Commands.
No other man with sparkle smile,
Blocking my thoughts with denial.
No other man with soothing word,
That would make sense of absurd.

No longer am i under love's control.
Never again will it rule my soul.
No longer am i blind to truth,
Never to believe again without proof.
No longer do i fear alone,
A Fire Queen to rule a kingless throne.
The memories of him bring dread,
All of humanity is dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    I like it, it was good, 5/5 no problem, the reson you dont get constructive comments is cuz you dont need help with your writting. I see no faults in this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    I like it, it was good, 5/5 no problem, the reson you dont get constructive comments is cuz you dont need help with your writting. I see no faults in this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Love is tough and still we can't live without it....Great job, very touching poem!!! I enjoyed reading it, very well done =0)

    *Much love Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    That was a great poem i really liked it. keep up the great work....luv and huggs....missy

  • 18 years ago

    by Brian King

    I like the whole no ther man thing it works well but the capital 'C' on command looks akward

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