Comments : Cheated

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    :-) Just thought you'd like to hear that I love your poem...really unique and good! 5/5 take care and always keep writing

  • Huni, u r such a great writer, im so sorry if this is well based on a true story, u deserve better! u deserve someone who treated you alot better! im here 4 u....luvink u always maddison xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by CaMeRoN

    Well done,i like this one best

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Aw. wow. this is really amazing. last like is my favorite =D... keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Wow, a powerful poem, made into a story, you did it really, really well. A sad truth it is to find the one you love cheating, and you portrayed it well. Well done, Greta xo

  • 15 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Wow...... this is a piece...... i like this one..... cool

    that sad........ but its beautiful...........