Only ash

by Unrequited   Sep 14, 2005


Inside me
since when have i been empty?
all feeling is lost
all my love is gone
inside me

i'm burning
my heart... only ash
hot white flames
rid me of what i am,
what i have become
for i hold nothing
inside me

you left
you moved on
and i am here
burning up
only ashes
as the wind takes me away
away from you

i am nothing
i hold nothing
inside me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Very unique...and a creative way of saying someone took all of you in their leave. I like this --much different than "oh you broke my heart" Nicely done!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Its beautiflly written & so very touching...5/5 .. good work !! pls check my poem "murder or suicide" i'd appreciate ur vote & comment

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    :( Bad times will turn into good times...there will always be both....hopefully there will be more good times coming up for you... Nicely done poem...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by sadnessinshadows

    I loved the way you wrote, usually i'm more into the rhyming ones, but i really liked it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    I love it it is so great awesome

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