I Feel....

by GoodMorning   Sep 14, 2005


I feel the floor beneath my feet collapsing
I feel the walls around me closing in
I'm suffocating
I'm being smothered

I feel the hate surrounding my world
I feel the blade cutting open my wrists
I'm bleeding
I'm being killed

I feel the loneliness growing
I feel the people who care leaving
I'm full of pain
I'm being tortured

I feel the numbness taking over
I feel the feelings disappearing
I'm empty
I've been numbed

*i know it's not very good....but i was sitting in chapel and i was bored and didn't want to listen to the guy lol....votes/comments are appreciated =)*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    Nice i really liked it keep up the work you just need to tweak it a little and it will be great.keep trying

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Wow to the point , again a lil repition but it fit well in the poem so it was good

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's very simple yet very very good, you made it clear how you feel with using just words.

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