I Swear I've Tried

by Lost & Delirious   Sep 14, 2005


The world is leaving me behind,
I just can't forget your eyes.
I swear I've really tried,
But I guess it will take time.

I'm sure I'll be OK
I will learn to let go.
I know I won't break
But I am so close.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is simple, yet very effective. Wording is excellent, and I like it from the beginning to the end.
    I love your work, keep up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, that word "Cause" caused me a lot of problems.. lol haha, umm yeah, it just didn't seem to flow well with this poem. Maybe try 'and' instead?.. hmm dont know.. whatever you like.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    I can really relate!keep it up,5/5

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