Suicidal Sacrifice

by Idiosyncratic   Sep 15, 2005


My forever weapon
Of heartaches and of pain
Bringing forth bloody tears
Pouring crimson rain

Twisting a knife
Anything but death
Stab a heart, stab a lung
Steal my every breath

Suicidal sacrifice
Wounds we terrify
Cross our fingers as we wish
We will always die

It's beneath us all
Not like we've never had hope
Hope to just once feel this pain
Burned by the strongest rope

One may surely wonder
Why acid burns the tongue
Why my blood is quite so red
Why the young die young

Strange as it is
Vampiric as it may seem
My knife is my wound
And I lick it clean

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Amamzingly well done. I like the little twist at the end. I love the play of words, and the dark emtion are rooted deep within the poem. Absoulty amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    OoOoO!!! nice words you aways have the best ones great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great poem by you, very greatly written, you are one of those poet that i dont want to miss any poem of,
    and yeah, tnx for using that title, it gave the poem a better face, very well done, you are doing it big keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! This is soo dark! I love it!! Dark poems rock!! This one is awesome! Great choice of words! Excellently written! Well done and keep writing! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Depressin? why do all ur depressing poems make me so depressed?

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