We are but two roses

by Avrii Monrielle   Sep 16, 2005


We are but two roses
Pushed away by time
Our petals falling,nothing left to cover our souls
If there was something to hold on to,we would reach
We are but two roses
Two souls
Two minds
Two hearts
We are but two roses
That grew up in the same bush
Battled our own thorns
Grew so the sun could touch our faces
So we could be caressed by life's tender thoughts
We grew so fast,time's rich soil bound our roots
The rain watered us
As we stood untouched by gentleness
We should have turned wild
But no,
We stood our ground
And we lived
To this day
Forever strong
Forever survivors
The fact still remains that
We are but two roses

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  • 13 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Dunno really what to say.. its very different, alot of great imagry.. some lines seemed out of place or forced but all in all, I really liked it

  • 13 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    You know...I cry for everything, I'm a cry baby (lol)...great poem it almost made me cry! :-) Great job tho. keep it up and nice poem! GREAT POEM.

  • 13 years ago

    by Emi

    Not Bad. It Adds Meaning But Not To Obvious. Nothing To Add, Good Work. *****

    +Lone Soul+