You're Worth It

by Poetic Tragedy08   Sep 16, 2005


Sanely breathing
Lying next to you
Whispering softly
As one and not two

Let me stay in your heart
That's where I know I belong
Beating softly today
Which has made me strong

Running your fingers
Up and down my arm
I smile widely
I'm safe from harm

Do you know exactly
What you mean to me?
I'd like this to be fate
Where I want to remain to be

Nothing will ever compare
For you I have this need
We're so close together
This is what we both believe

I quote this small line
To the one who means it all
Part my lips to lightly say
"Baby, never let me fall"

Ya ok, I know its not good, but I posted something because I haven't for a while, I'm still working on it, so I'll fix it up, so suggestions will help! thanks in advance!

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  • 18 years ago

    by `*~1-lUv~*`

    If 2 u this aint good i wonder wat a good poem 4 iz. Probably a master piece ;)! N dont change anything in this poem leave it how it is.
    -HUGS N KISSES

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    I like it just the way it is. its awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Beautiful yet again, another 5/5 for you,

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow umm.. i'm confused, how can you say that that poem isn't good?? Its better than all my poems put together! It had a great flow and great rhyming, you did a great job, keep up the good work, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    If that's not good, then God Almighty do I suck! :( I love this Travis...you're amazing! -5-...and you will forever stay on my favorites list. Seriously, tell when you post more!
    Forever I Remain,
    Love Sheena