Helping Me

by Katlynn   Sep 16, 2005


It seems like you don't care anymore.
i tell you something you probably don't wanna hear.
but it's bugging the heck out of me.
all you have to say is "I'm sorry"

it's like you can't help me at all.
you can't save me from this mistake.
this disgrace that i have once in my life.
why do i want to be that one and only your wife.

maybe because i love you so much.
but it seems like you don't care.
you wouldn't have time to bare.
it just bugs me so much more then anything.

to me it's like the world was all lights.
and now it's time for the night.
before i say good night all the lights are gone.
no night light to keep me save not even you.

I'm sorry Hun but i do love you.
but to me now you don't care.
the other guy touched me in a wrong way.
i just had a hard time to act or say.

so I'll bit my nails in disbelief.
that you will always be saying your sorry.
and not actually my real prince.
that is suppose to be helping me.

*i wasn't sure where i should actually put this poem under the love section*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    This is a good poem, but i also found it rather difficult to follow

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay lets see...this was a good poem...im comletly confused though like poems arnt always meant to be understood but this one more less seemed like it was meant to tell a story correct me im wrong....so yes from what i read i believe you dont think your lover cares anymore, and you were also raped somewhere along the line? the rhyme scheme was off and on which i though disrupted the poems balance......so it could use some work but it was good none the less

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Hmm i liked it alot but the rhyming was kinda scattered and stuff and it was kinda hard to follow. otherwise great job