Let Us Fix This

by Renee   Sep 19, 2005


-*- The first two stanzas are about one person. The stanzas after are about a different person for each of them.-*-

Your words are stale, they're no longer clear.
But your sweet voice is there, still ringing in my ear.
I need your reassurance, say you still love me
don't leave me now, with that pistol still bloody.

Talk to me, please, or at least let me know -someone's- there
I'd hate for you to beleive no-one cares.
I gave you my life, I don't expect yours in return.
I just wish I could fix you, instead of watch you burn.

Fate has silly ways, of playing with our lives.
There's a memory we can -never- have, of our last goodbye.
The words I never said, still balled up in a fist
I wish I took that last chance to fix this.

Wasted nights, that changed my whole world.
You were right there in that sick bathroom,
whispering "I'm your girl"
You've had a sh.it life, but angel, you are blessed
Thank you so much for fixing this mess.

Mother, I know, I'm an antonym of your dream.
But I don't realize, you love me more than it seems.
My mind isn't stable, and I'm getting help
maybe I'll get up the courage to fix myself.

We don't talk anymore, no random hellos.
I would predict your every move, now it's you I don't know.
I need you to need me, look babe, I'm still here
and I'll be trying to fix you until you leave m'dear.

I'm sorry, I was so damn obvious today.
I'm a mess, but it's not supposed to show in my face.
Don't worry about a thing, you've got your own problems.
There's no way you can fix this mess that I've started.

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Your poems are so sad... well i guess it reflects what ur going thru... dont worry there are many out there... atleast im out here..
    sad & vexed
    thats how all my poems and quotes are too.... sad & depressing
    got just one love poem on my site :(
    i liked ur poem cuz its very expressive & intense !!
    give u a 5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    BAM! This will slap you right in the face...it’s very powerful and very good Renee...You can fix anything m'dear. If you want a change - CHANGE IT. Just do it... (So I don't get arrested I got that from the Nike commercials...LMAO) Seriously though - anything can be fixed or made better at least. I hope all is well in your world. I want something happy to read now...lol Talk to you later –

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I didn't read it yet but I will...I started a new club...please come join us!

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    This is beautiful angel. So sad and so touching, it really reaches out to the reader and lets them feel your pain and sadness. It really expresses how you just want to get your point across to these people. You're so sweet hun, so amazing and so lovely. I will forever love you and be here for you...I promise you. I wish I could give you everything you wish for and everything you desire, I wish I could give you the complete love you deserve. Thank you for being here for me, and I hope someday I can return the favor...forgive me for not being the best I can be for you. I love you dear. I hope you're alright...My ears are open for you. xxxxxxxxxx

    Love you my pretty fabulous drum set queen,
    Your pretty pistol.x.

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