by Katlynn Sep 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
|
I Sit Here On The Beach. |
by .
|
Awwww 5/5 good job...i liked your comment lol keep it up |
by Jason Meres
|
Nicely pulled across and well described, again your idea is the strongest point. |
|
I thought it was very good,very well written,could use a little rythm,but that doesn't matter it was very good |