WOW...the last line just blew me away.... again excellent job!

oh yea, that just got you in my fav.

This is a nice short detication poem, I really enjoyed it.
It shows how you feel about this person, and how much they can help you. well done.

The flow was good, no forced rhyming well done!

lisaness x)

I love how you start out with this poem, It gives it a nice feel to it, but the end line I think could be rephrased a little better, like say "Give me a reason to drop this knife." I don't know, I think it sounds more appropriate for a poem rather than the shortened words. You did a great job with the beginning though, it sounded great. I hope all is well with you.

Take Care,
Renee

This dark poem has a smooth flow

Nice job girl been there and still am hope things get better 5.5

I liked this poem the only thing i dont like is "each day a step closer to death i leap"...the "i leap" dosnt sound right....and cuz should should be "because"....other then that it was an awsome poem 4/5

Yeah...love it...but you know i have a poem with the same title...only thing is it's a friendship poem for a guy that stood by myside when i am hurt by the guy i love...and his my best friend...now and always will be...

Hey...no more? :'(

Hope you will write more...tell me if you have post it...i'll check it...and thanks for your comments...so sweet of you...luv ya...darling...jane.

Good poem!
short n simple, and straight to the point!
take care, xoxoxo

You should really get this guy to read your poems
Great work Amy

After reading through many of these poems...I've come to find that you should expand your emotions...Stop trying to find a word that rhymes and just write down how you feel.
XOXO,
Kayla

This is sooo good....even thoe u did try too hard to make it rhyme...it was very touching and i can tel that u put a lot into it...i gave you a 5/5 just because this is a great poem...keep it up

Great poem the rhyming seemed a little foced though....i still liked it a lot though :-D

It was a good piece as i understood totally what you meant. The flow was ok and keep on writing :)

Aww hun that is so sad... Hunny, I'm really sorry I know how hard it is to loose someone you love..

The power of passion is well reflected in this poem

Very dark Emotions, but in a sense beautiful, well written=) great job=D

Very well writen powerful peice, the emotions are well very portrayed and the overall peice well composed

5/5

This is like a rap! very good rhythm and well put together. xx

This is another great poem hun.
it was a fantasic read.
i LOVED it.
keep um comin

gema xoxoxox