When we met

by Ashelin   Sep 20, 2005


On the day we met
When our paths crossed
I was alone
So alone

No one could break
The spell over me
No one could pull me
In from the storm

My heart was shattered
The pieces scattered
I became a souless
Wandering creature

Darkness overshadowed
The light from the sun
My tears and the rain
Became one

On the day we met
When our paths crossed
I saw you and the light
From the sun was over your head

You broke the spell
Hanging over me
You pulled me in
From the rain

You put the pieces
Of my shattered heart
back together again
And saved my soul from the darkness

You stopped the pain
You stop the tears
You helped me see
The light above me

I'll always remember
How you held out your hand
And gave me the light
From the sun again.

On the day we met
When our paths crossed
You showed me the love
I'd thought I lost

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  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Thank4 commenting on my poem. and im sorry if my comment seemed a bit mean b4 i was really mad @ luke cause we got 2gether again and he just dumped me like 2 hours b4 i got on here.

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This is a good poem but NO guy will stick around, if he says he luvs u he wants 2 get in your pants, if he says you'll neva part hes gonna dump u asap! plz read sum of mine about luke and you'll no wat im talkin about!
    but good writing just remember EVERY guy will hurt u NO EXCEPTIONS!

  • Nice poem, a lot of emotion.
    Thanks for your comment on my poem, 'dancing with demons' i appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx