A Hopeful Image

by LadyPearl   Sep 20, 2005


Tender wisps of morning fog
seeping past old fallen logs
swimming towards lakes of blue
surrounded by strange cheerful hues

Flowers sprout as rain pour forward
Songs of purity flow from summer birds
Fish renewed and dance to new fun
splashing till the rise of sun

Dragonfly soar in grace
Their wings like a rainbow lace
Past the leaves full of dreams
shining through delightful beams

*not my best

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    Wow...very creative...if you think enough its like a portrait..haha..i like the way you used you figures of speech there...really cool...haha...keep on writing!:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    A little shaky flow wise in a few spots, but the true power of it lies in the imagery, which is amazingly well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Awww this poem is so cute ^_^ it makes me smile, i liked it cause it made me smile ^_^ i want summer back *starts crying* o well
    great job 5/5

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