Water

by Katlynn   Sep 20, 2005


I let myself down.
i made my body drown.
i couldn't open my eyes.
i can't die.
I'm to young.
don't need this now.
some say who? and how?
no one doesn't know me.
can't you see?
I'm dead.
I'm a ghost of your shadow.
I'll be outside of your window.
just don't remember me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good short and gets to the point good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Beautiful..

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Katlyn, this is truly a fantastic piece. I am awed by your evident talent. Thoguh short, very powerful: "I'm a ghost of your shadow" I love that. Full of excellent imagery. Impressive. Some errors with the capitalisation, but perhaps that was the intent, to show you are not as great! Wow, great piece. Keep it up!

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