Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though.

Wow that was really good and emotional! you expressed yourslef very well 5/5
Becky
xoxo

Wow...i think this is an amazing poem.. lovely flow
good use of words..\nice write\5/5
love
amy

Aw hun this is so beautiful, I can easily relate to the poem and it's something I'm going through right now in life and it's poetry like this that helps a lot, it helps to know i'm not the only one so thank you for that, take care

I think that its kinda interesting how good this sounds w/o really rhyming!! awsome job 5/5

This is beautifully sad. I enjoyed it a whole bunchies! 5/5 *MUAH*

Aww thats sad....
but it's good! I love your poetry!!
It's awesome.

Another awesome poem
worth readin over and over
great flow
touching words
love
amy

Thats really sad, but keep your chin up!
Bloomed Rose

I really like this. It's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. I know I definitely know the feeling. You did a great job on this. It flowed very well and held up well. Great job on this!

This poem reminds me of something, only some parts of the poem, but it's something I mostly keep between me and few people.
I'll cry when no one's arround,
Cause I don't want them to find out,
[Reminds me of a thought I think abou just about every day now.]
I don't speak the tears of my soul,
[Reminds me of how I still find that hard]
Cause to share pain, there's no need.
[Or burden them, right?]

I luved ur poem and i wannna tell u that u can cry and let out all of ur pain and sorrow and i wanna tell u that everything will be alright.