Pain and love

by josh mills   Sep 21, 2005


I found a girl
that i love as
much as pain
but yet I'm
wondering if
shes sane if
shes crazy so
am i god i just
want to die
to die is to live
and to live is to die
god i just want to
cry but i wont let
them see a tear
as long as your here

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This poem is short but i loved it great job 5/5

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Leona

    Wow i like
    5/5
    how have you been?

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    It's not bad....the flow isn't great, but i'm not good with flow either, so it's understandable lol....it confused me, too....but not everyone is supposed to understand every poem, right? keep on writing =)

    -brittnay-
    *silly bi+ch*
    ~cloudy sky~
    =Armidillo Buttkisser=
    $brittnizzle$

  • 18 years ago

    by josh mills

    Its not bad i guess

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