Reason

by josh mills   Nov 17, 2007


My life seems to have no reason
no matter what the season
my life is so chaotic
to most it would seem erotic
to me my life is meaningless
damn my world is a mess
I'm tired of having to impress
why does my life suck so much
why do i hate your touch
do i blame you for my feelings
is that why i feel like bouncing off the ceiling
why is life so bad
why do i feel so mad
why am i alive
why cant i survive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Linds

    Cool.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    "to me my life is meaningless
    damn my world is a mess
    I'm tired of having to impress"
    kind of breaks your 2-word rhyming streak but it fits and makes sense. I like it a alot better now that you edited it. 5/5 ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by XxHow High Can You Fly With Broken WingsxX

    WOW THAT KINDA OF SOUNDS LIKE MY LIFE... THIS POEM IS SO GOOD

  • 18 years ago

    by CrossMyHeartAndHopeToDie

    It makes sense, and i like it and i can relate to it. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    This is a really great poem. You just need to work on rhyming and punctuation. I would give it a 3/5 but I won't vote until you edit it and make it better.

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