Thinking about you

by Katlynn   Sep 21, 2005


My Mind Is Ripping.
My Tears Are Shedding.
I'm Thinking About You Again.

My Cuts Are Bleeding Again.
My Thoughts Wonder Around The Room.
I'm Thinking About You Again.

You Pushed Me To The Ground.
You Hated With Your Words.
But Some How I'm Thinking About You Again.

My Mind Is Roting Again.
My Heart Isn't Pounding.
My Cuts Are Bleeding.
My Thoughts Are Wasting.
My Fantasy Are Fading.
But My Nightmare Stays.
Until That Day Again.
Of Thinking About You.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    5/5 good job loved it
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    First of all..I have to say...I love your last name..Plumador...*Shakes head* Fasinating, lol.
    Now, I loved this...it had a much better flow and I loved the purpose of the poem....such a wonderful job!

    Love
    DarkSuicide

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "My Thoughts Wonder Around The Room."
    It should be "wander" not "wonder"

    "My Mind Is Roting Again."
    I think rotting has two 't's

    To speak for a moment about your poetry in general, I don't think you really need to capitalize each word, or end each line with a period. It can be slightly distracting for the reader, and can often cause problems concerning the flow of the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I liked it,it was different the way you wrote it

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