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Well done my friend! Your poems are always so beautiful and wonderful. Just lovely...Great job, hope to read some more of your work soon. Take care and always keep writing and sharing your beautiful poetry with us 5/5 ^_^ Cuidate y no dejes de escribir nunca, eres una inspiracion para todos :-)

Gesselle

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EXCELLENT!!!

The gentle'autumnal breeze caress'th my cheek,
the joy this brings I can no longer seek
this seems slightly forced, maybe you should consider revising?
The flowers sigh their beautiful perfumes,
perhaps if you somehow reword that to say natural perfumesm, i think it would be more effective.
the last segment seems to clash with the rest. nicely done though, I enjoyed it. keep up the good work! 4/5

Beautiful words. I love autumn too, with the orange leaves and the soft breeze..

HansRik,

This is a splendid portrait that you have painted with your words.
Very enjoyable.

Regards,

Steve

HansRik,
A beautiful and calming piece truly a pleasure to read...

hugs, love, Ann

Well… I'm a little golden leave that has been blown away by the wind of your poem. Ok that was cheesy but, seriously your poem, wow. I could point out my favourite parts but then I'd be pasting the entire poem. Your format, diction and rhyming was spot on. The fluent flow of your words really emphasised the beauty of this season. I have nothing else to say but keep sharing this amazing talent with words you have. Well done.

Oh yes, just thought I'd let you know. You're now on my favourites!!

This was so pretty

The flowers sigh their natural perfumes,
and gently as ever they have stopped to bloom.
My nose, thus hopes, their last breaths to consume

that was my favorite line i love this style of writing...about nature that is...im not too good at describing physical things but your great good job really 5/5

This was so pretty

The flowers sigh their natural perfumes,
and gently as ever they have stopped to bloom.
My nose, thus hopes, their last breaths to consume

that was my favorite line i love this style of writing...about nature that is...im not too good at describing physical things but your great good job really 5/5

Wow, HansRik, this is just so fantastic.
I specially liked the last two lines and
this line:
the joy this brings I can no longer seek
by the way, thank you so much
for your lovely comment.
you don’t know how much
it made made me happy. Thanks.
take care,
marjan

Very good poem!

Jacs
xxx

Wow.. i can relate to this poem so much.. thx for ur comment last time..i like this poem a lot as i like seasonal poem.. ^^. keep ur good job..

I love the beauty you describe. First stanza and last stanza both have the last line not quite rhyming with the first two lines but otherwise I really enjoyed this poem.

Excellent, I loved reading this poem so much i had to read it 3 times over. just excellent work.

This is really good..so are all of your poems! 5/5 Keep it up!
Becky
xoxo

Wow

Can't wait for Winter! Write on please, nice feelings.

Peace

Thanx 4 entering my contest, n im sry that u didnt get a place, but u were kept in mind quite a lot in my choices. i luv the vocab u use. i give u a 5/5..keep up the gr8 work!
~*Who Cares?*~

This poem is really beautiful.

Really really good, what else can I say?
Don't stop writing

Matt