Goodbye

by Testimony   Sep 23, 2005


I loved my best friend
Who taught me this lesson
and as my confession
I'll say I can no longer pretend
Sadly, this friendship has to end
Goodbye. Until we meet again
This door is closed
Dead to you as a deseased persons coffin.
I'm headed for the open.
You lost me
Your chains have been broken
My last words before freedom has been spoken.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow! i love this poem!! it's amazing and i love it wonderful flow! ur very talented keep up the good work. and i'd love it if u'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks!!
    Rachel<3

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. im so sory u feel that way.. i lykd ur poem .. especially the part that says :
    "and as my confession
    I'll say I can no longer pretend
    Sadly, this friendship has to end"
    keep goin
    take care