I Can Feel

by Tess   Sep 24, 2005


Burning salty tear droplets fall slowly coming from my
Hurt eyes.
The flame of pain blazed up in side of me like a bat out of hell.
With in my traumatized, heart.
Torn apart losing all hope and faith, to ever
love again. The pain scorching inside of me nearly
defeating all the strength left inside of me. This ache caused by such a powerful
but consequential thing called love. For me this incident of love was heart breaking, sleep taking, tear jerking, and heart killing. You lied to me. You made me disbelieve in this so called love, but I believed you. You just had to take every little sign of good feeling left in me. Leaving me feeling confused, hurt, and suffering
from tremendous amount of pain that I could feel.

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  • 18 years ago

    by YoungSaint

    5/5 no doubt.. nice to see that between risking it to fold undies .. you can write the deep and meaningul stuf like this.. i like it.. keep it up your rock my socks

  • 18 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    Oh its a bit of a sad poem, ar u ok, *huggles*n keep up tha gud work