Black

by Green M&M   Sep 24, 2005


Black is the color i see in my hair,
it's the color i see in the shirts you wear,
it's the color i see when i close my eyes,
it's the color in my mind when you tell me your lies,
it's everywhere, in your mind, at home out side,
it's what crosses your mind when you die,
it's just there,

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good.. it was a bit too repetitive for my liking but that might be just me.. i liked your descriptions of black and i think i might do a poem like this. :) another thing that i think you can improve is at the end your rhyming just stops. i think you should continue it throughout the poem. nice job 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashelin

    This, to me, is a good poem. I like it at least.

  • 18 years ago

    by jesika

    Its really good. the thing is i understand it

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    I like this poem, it's straight to the point and short and simple but still really good.
    xxx cici xxx

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