Comments : Tormented Dreams

  • I'm Very Impressed, Fluid Flow, Talanted Word Ussage...Great Imagery That Caught My Eye...And Captured My Heart...Perfection Shined Through This Poem 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by silence kills

    Great poem, i really liked it. it had a nice flow too 5/5 you have talent, keep it up! and thanks for commenting me

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Another great piece I can really relate to.The losing things part and insomnia reference hit home.The rhyme scheme works very well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    A great piece of work Holly, I have calloborated on a few poems and it really gets the juices flowing. Fantastic work, I can`t wait to see more. Love, Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I even callaborated on some poems too..lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyn

    A well-written poem, very descriptive. Long poems have to be very good to keep me reading to the end and this certainly did.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Holly.....
    What an awesome collab you two put together ..
    Two beautiful minds put together to create a masterpice of emotion ...It captured my attention and held it from beginning to end ...
    I'm off to give your partener my comment ..
    Take care Holly always a pleasure to read one of your new poems..

  • 18 years ago

    by Rose

    Holly, haven't read anything of yours in a while and it's wonderfully refreshing. I love this meter for you it really shows off your comfort with words. Great piece. You toy with words so well..heh..
    i'll be back to read more ;)
    roseoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by sinister

    Thank you for your kind words. i really liked this one. deep and dark.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    An awsome dark poem i loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Woh! Really awesome poem! I can totally relate to. Love your style! 5/5
    keep it up! ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.