How Long Will I wait?

by last_petal   Sep 25, 2005


Sultry evenings
And even cold ones
Have passed by
Still I'm waiting

Waiting for you
For your return
For your sweet caress
And for your love

Don't know
If I'm gonna
Expect something
In your return

Do I still have to wait?
Till my star
Lose it's light
In those evenings you make me wait

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  • 16 years ago

    by AllysonWonderland

    Also a good one keep it up and ill be back to check for new poems sometime

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I really like the repitition in this, it flows really well!

    well done!!

    lonelynow xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is a good poem, keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good job liked it alot 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    I liked it, you did a good job, 5/5

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