Comments : Whole Again

  • 14 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Shannon,
    Great poem...I love your tittle because it relates so much to the poem 5/5 well written and all! ^_^ take care

  • 13 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    This poem had a very good flow and was written beautifully. Nice job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    A nice poem..well written..good flow..sweet..and cute..keep it up..keep writing!:)
    xx
    mezkenzie

    *plz comment on mine 2!! thankz

  • 13 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey hey! Great poem, it was really sweet. The flow was fairly well done and had depth and meaning. Some of your lines convayed such a powerful message and fit perfectly. I really liked the lines:

    "I will always catch you when you begin to fall
    And will always stand next to you proud and tall"

    That was the most beautiful line ever. Well done. This is a great write! Keep it up! 5/5 =D
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo