Comments : Suicidal girl

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Very good poem, I dont think you would steal anything from anyone, I think this poem was so full of emotion, I felt so emotional whilst reading it and normally I have a heart of stone.. So well done to you and keep on writing
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    People that steal work from others are pathetic. Though inturn it shows just how jealous they are, because they couldn't produce a poem like yours. Well done on this one, it had this sort of sick sense of reality that i don't think anybody wants to feel. Love your writing hun

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    Great poem its really good i love it you can really understand whats going on...i dont think you'd ever take anyone elses work i had that happen to me just yesterday i posted a poem for my cousin in Iraq someone took it said i took it from them i know for a fact i didnt...but keep up the great writing...
    XXX
    Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by SPC Ecklund

    Your poems is really awesome keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Wow wonderful poem, and good idea to stick up for yourself hunni..your a legend and i love you and ya work..well done bub

    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Great job... thats sad that someone would steal a poem like that... ugh.... anyways... keep up your great work..
    take care
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Very amazing poem! Flowed great..loved it!

    Love
    Haily

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem..really that was great.
    "For years she was a cutter
    she walked in a suicidal dream
    no one listened to her
    no one heard her scream"
    that bit really stuck to me...so how i feel..wow.
    take care hun x x x 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This poem is great!
    Its so sad but I was stuck from the begining to end! The flow wasnt forced and it was easy to read.
    The person who stole this was idiotic....this is a great poem and you must be proud it is yours :D

    Well done x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    I loved it so much i'm lost for words
    I mean yeah I can't even begin to walk your shoes but I'm not about to steal them hehe
    So I'll work my lil hands to the bone to at least run the same league hehe
    love it r/c some of mine give me your imput, help etc
    take care
    love kirsty xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Quite graphic in the descriptions, it sounded very dark, like she was covered in blood, and just kept cutting until she died. I thought ppl cut so that they could feel the pain, and why do it if they never felt a thing. Still, very deep.

  • 18 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    WoW! That was really good and I can totally understand! It made so much sense to me! GOOD JOB! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Excellent poem, absoultey outstanding...

    I have nothing to say but you spelled "Steal" wrong. =P

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by mihara

    Wow...its a great poem..^^
    it has so much emotion..! i do believe that this poem is yours ^^
    continue writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    This is really depressing but i guess true if you are so unhappy with life and if you aware willing to take all of it away...you probably will have consequences

  • 18 years ago

    by Olivia

    Wow that was awesome I am speechelss, and I relate so well....You are amazing keep up the good work!
    ~Olivia~

  • 18 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    I love it. very good job. 5/5. I can relate so much. it reminds me of myself and something i would write. keep it up.

    .Savannah.

  • 18 years ago

    by pale angel

    I love it. it a good stroy and i know that you worte this. i am glade that i am not the only one who writes with tihs much meaning bihind it

    love heather

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    It's so weird how people never notice things like this. You think that when someone cuts that people would see, when someone cries people would know but the world is so flippin' blind sometimes, so blind. I've been that girl, as have many people I've met. It's just wrong. You wrote this poem extremely well. GREAT JOB!!!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow this is really good!!! I can relate, it seems someone is always there and ready to shove you down and nobody wants to help. Stay strong and if you ever need to talk I'm here!!! :-)
    Stephanie