That Red Shining Liquid

by Afraid of the Dark   Sep 25, 2005


My knife is my steed,
Leading me on,
To another place,
Where i might belong.

It's shiny new silver,
Tainted with blood,
Realeses the anger,
Releases the flood.

All over the floor,
I can now see,
That red shining liquid,
Was once part of me.

But I am not sad,
I am joyous with glee,
For that red shining liquid,
Has now set me free.

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  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Fantastic, amazing, I don't even know how to describe how awesome this poem is. I can easily relate to this as well. Great write!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Great poem very well written. keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    OMG that poem is even more awesome than your other one i just read (that i thought was awesome also). Keep it up sister!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Thats a great poem so welll written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Caroline

    Thats amazing, well written, love it !

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