Good-Bye Brian

by Anthony   Sep 25, 2005


I'm drowning in your hatred,
I can't breathe under your lies.
Remorse is not your virtue,
I see demons in your eyes.

Your mindless acts of randomness,
Now don't seem so mindless.
Just a bit more random though,
Now that I see your heartless.

I've never felt more lonely
Than when you told me I was fake.
You don't admit that you're wrong,
But that's your mistake to make.

How dare you tell me who I am?
I don't think that it's your call.
I'm so tired of giving a damn!
I no longer Care at all!

A fool, unwise, is what you are.
A minuscule fear.
Just for you and what you do,
I refuse to shed a tear.

Here's some food for thought,
Just a lesson you must learn.
Sometimes people just like you
Have nowhere left to turn.

And when that time has come
I do hope that I am there.
Just to look you in the eye
And say, "Honestly, I don't care."

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    OOoooohhh! Burn! That was a third degree burn!

    Seriously, it' a nice poem with so much hatred and emotions unknown to makind!

    My favourite lines were:

    "And when that time has come
    I do hope that I am there.
    Just to look you in the eye
    And say, "Honestly, I don't care"

    I think it would had been better if it said "Honestly, I never care."

    But I do have bad choice in poetry after all. I mean, what other sane reason I have for reading your poems? =)

    5/5

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    Aww this is really sadd
    but it's awesome
    god I wish i could write liek that.
    i don't even know 1/2 of the words you do.
    keep it up mann

  • 18 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Woah.. u wrote that really well!!! it was sad but i relate!! good write

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