Please Scream Break Slow

by Jamie   Sep 26, 2005


**again i'm venting..there are so many areas in this i want to change because they just sound dumb so any suggestions are welcome***

Im so far beneath the ice
Im screaming and Im trapped
Inside hallow lies
Such a dark place
My thoughts are enveloped in blood
Sealed with pain in liquid form
Kill me I beg of you
PLEASE
Im sick and im dying these
Maggots infest they crawl and
They devastate my internal
Hopes and dreams, what the f-uck
What the f-u-ck is happening
Is this what panic is
Give into me give into me
PLEASE
My mouth meets plastic
As you suffocate my soul
Crush me with every effort
But its simple
Its so simple, effort not needed
Call me a loser, call me anything
Just call me, call me
PLEASE
Oh god, oh god no, I cant
I cant keep dissecting every word
You speak you are disconnected
Connect these lies make them true
Dismantle false perception
Bleed gently through the fakers
Your fake, make me bleed, make me bleed
PLEASE
Continued to follow you
But why do I not recognize
Your smiles so deceiving
You are synthetic, you are fabrication
It seethes and writhes within
And you cant pull it out because it's not there
F-uc-k you. Just take it away
PLEASE

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    *Claps* sometimes rants are then best poetry.. they get to the heart of the amtter=) keep it up and coming

    Love
    Jenn x0x0x
    Ps. take pride in your work, you took the time to make it *im really not someone who should say that but hey:D*

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    I really liked this poem. and thank you for ur comment i know its not all that exiting but that wasnt my point all the poem if for my bf who had borenk a promise to me and we had all ready wrked it all out. but i wanted him to know he could tell how i felt just my looking at me. but i really do appertioate ur comment im always opne for citizizem and on ways to help me imporve on my writing. so thank you:)
    brittany

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