One Year Since I Awoke

by A Heart Losing Hope   Sep 26, 2005


The past year has been the best,
and the worst,
year of my life.
I never thought I would ever find someone as perfect as you.
You awoke someone inside of me I never knew on that great day.
Someone that cannot be manipulated.
Someone that can not be reasoned with.
Every moment I'm with you
is never long enough;
I wish i could string every second out forever,
until the end of time,
because your so perfect.
But when your away,
I'm dead.
I am nothing.
The longer you are away,
the more i miss you,
and the more i need you.
Can we make it last forever?
Or will the moment end.
All i can do is promise it will never end within my heart.
Within this new person inside of me.
No matter what happens,
I will always love you.
Heres to another painfully perfect year.

~A Hopeful Heart~
- I Love you Amanda!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I kno exactly how u feel, unfortunately my relationship ended:(. anyway, this poem shos ur emmotions really well, n i think it is realy sweet...5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Heres to another painfully perfect year

    thats my favorite line....

    i think every single one of your poems is about her now...kinda boring...and it shows your pretty darn obsessed...which is an okay thing to an extent, i know you just started to this is okay i think your a really talented guy though so once again just try something new! good job keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It sounded like you were definitely needing your love, and that you needed her to be close for always.
    Very sweet!
    The rhythm was soft and not very pronounced, but still quite charming.

    Good Writing!
    beth