How About You (Part I)

by A Heart Losing Hope   Oct 13, 2005


A million dollars,
a mansion,
a new car!
If you could have one wish,
any one wish,
thats guaranteed to come true,
what would you wish for?
A million dollars?
A mansion?
A new car?
Or maybe,
maybe something less...
extravagant,
less flashy,
less worldly?
Or maybe,
something more subtle,
something that lasts longer,
holds stronger,
and worth so much more?
How about happiness?
Maybe to be self happy,
to be optimistic,
and blissful.
Or maybe,
to know that you have given someone else,
someone you hold dear,
that happiness,
That sense of optimism,
the sense of security,
bliss.

~A Hopeful Heart~
-I love you Amanda!

Please comment ~ it means a lot to me!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Idk how u cood have such a low ratin on this 1...only a 3...well now 3.7 now that i added my 5. that was excellent..!!!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Yes, this is very nice, I liked the note it ended on. I myself am also trying to write a story in poetry in a few pieces, but so far its not working out too well.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Really good!! I'm going to hurry and go check out the other ones too :) This is a good poem, I like the idea and the unique sense about it, very clever! keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I really like this poem!!! You did a fantastic job!! keep up the great work 5/5

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