Hey omg you are a great writer i loved your poem wanted sucuide, i commented on it so be sure to read it, your writing is great, everything flows, and it actually means things, this is how i feel about my dad, we don't see each other anymore. please be sure to read my poems and comment on them it would really mean alot.
I love the beginning stanza its adorable, and I love the gradation coming down to the very last line. very well done, I dont have any poniters to give you =)
On another note: I'd like to welcome you to Fish bowl, I'm jenn the head fish, if you need anything let myfself or >tornapart or fighter know, we'll be happy to help. All i ask is that you read the welcome thread, and that you follow site and club rules. but most of all you have fun and enoy your stay in the bowl =) I'm looking forward to getting to know you and your writing,
Wow, That poem was..breathtaking. it was so..wow. i cant think of what to say. Ur such an amazing writer, and i love all of your poems. Keep up your great work. Love ya! xBlackRosex aka, Jessica. Mwah!
Woah.. this is such a sad poem.. so many ppl would find that this poem is true to them. and how their dad treats them.
your such a great writer.
please dont stop.
even if your suffering
from writers block
whatever comes to your head
always write it down
you never no what might happen
and whose life you could turn around
woah.. that was pretty cool,.. made a little rhyme.. keke. love ya hunni!