GoodBye

by Brittany   Sep 26, 2005


Family and Friends
I just gotta say...
I won't be here to the end of YOUR days...
I will miss you
But right now I feel so lonesome
So lonesome I don't wanna wake up in the mornings...
My life has changed dramatically...
True I'm only 17...
But remember teens usually have the hardest times in life
Cuz people are so cruel...
Their life just doesn't work out...
I guess what I'm trying to say...
Is good bye...
To my dear mother who has always been there for me... but ya make me crazy mom... as crazy as I can be...
Dad I love you... you had taken me as your own child... but your drinking is just making me wanna cry... It hurts mama too... but you just don't seem to care...
Sister you hate me... theres no doubt about it... but no matter if you don't know it I have to tell you this I love you and I will guard you with my very heart and life...
Brother the one I partied with... it has always been a blast... I will miss you... true when we were younger we hated each other too...
But as we grew we got closer... well I guess this is a good bye... I love You all so much...
But I can't just live for you... I have to live for me too...

Brittany

P.S. Please comment or vote it would mean a lot to me... even if it is criticizing...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Brittany,
    You wrote this well...But I hope there's no intention of what this poem says that you're planning to do...Life is precious...I've experienced so many downfalls in my life, but this is something that has never crossed it. I hope you were just writing and not meaning it...Sometimes being younger you think there's no way out or seeing things get better...but they will...You hold your chin high and be strong and have a little faith and Brittany things can change...Try to be strong....

    hugs, love, Ann