WoW!!! that was really good. Very good rhyme sceme. I loved it but i hope you don't really think like that. Hold on gurl everything will get better!!

Very nicely done, M'Lovely.

"She hears the wispers inside her head,
there was no way out but to be dead;"

I'm sure it's an honest mistake, you spelled "whispers" wrong. =)

My favourite lines were:

"When finally, one day she couldn't cope,
she lost all will, lost all hope;"

and

"She left all things inside her head,
now she is nothing, nothing but dead;"

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

That was so good you have great talent keep it up 5/5

Wow.. very great writing..i just hope its not true.. ut very nice 5/5 you are an excellent poet and i cannot wait to read more!

Another well written dark poem with a flawless flow

Verrrrrrryyyy good. i loved it. everything was perfect. good job

You have a great natural ability to rhyme. i think it comes very easy for you partly because you use words that are obvious but then other because you are pretty darn talented. your flow is incredibly smooth great job

Ooo, compelling! But yet another suicide poem. originaly written, though, so you get a 5/5. hehe, good job, really!

Wow!!
I loved this, this is my favourite by you.
I thought this was excellent.